Sunday, January 23, 2011

Spring, Summer, Fall

Charming petals lure
bees buzzing and flapping wings
Thrilled to hunt honey.

Ripples curl and swish
crash against rocks lying on shore
frothing and slapping sand.

This way and that way
sways and blows against cool breeze -
tree greeting the fall.



1 comment:

  1. The syllables are all correct and the image i had on the top was a very warm spring, and I felt really cozy since its freezing outside;;; Anyways there were strong words like sway and blow I think..In the second one it gave me an hot summer ocean because of the wave images I made in my head. there were strong word choices like crash, slapping.I'm not really good at finding strong words:[ anyways, the last one I found flapping and hunt for the strong word choice, it gave me a image of spring when the bees start to move around to look for honey and I really like all of them:]

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